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Old 11-20-2011, 06:25 AM   #851
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anger
like a wild beast
is never satisfied;
constantly prowling, it's hunting
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Old 11-21-2011, 01:49 AM   #852
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Old 11-21-2011, 03:35 AM   #853
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the dead
don't walk around
seeking life to devour
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Old 11-22-2011, 08:48 AM   #854
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they sleep,
dreams of our youth,
unlikely to awake;
unless, if we should try again
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Old 11-22-2011, 11:03 AM   #855
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to dream
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not to give out too much
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Old 11-22-2011, 09:05 PM   #856
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Of yours
there is little,
which speaks volumes of you--
the blather of flying fur and
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Old 11-25-2011, 07:17 AM   #857
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sprayed spit
splattered your thoughts
in such small increments,
your point like a Pollock painting;
get it?
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Old 11-26-2011, 12:43 AM   #858
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Get it,
push to the front,
the Friday of black souls.
The last shall be first, like in the
Bible.
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Old 11-26-2011, 03:23 AM   #859
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Bible,
soul map,
illuminates
my eyes to see God's plan,
the juxtaposition of life
and death
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Old 11-27-2011, 12:25 PM   #860
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are you tweaking?
you smacked-out? // so how did you miss
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Old 11-28-2011, 04:06 AM   #861
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our tryst,
a simple lark,
looks now like a vulture
waiting to swoop down for what's left,
roadkill
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Old 12-01-2011, 04:09 AM   #862
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Roadkill
litters my life--
strewn about the pavement--
a high school version of West Side
Story.
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Old 12-04-2011, 11:19 PM   #863
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Story is a countable noun, so I used stories. If this is cheating, shoot me.



Stories,
as yet untold,
lie quietly and wait.
Dormant like seeds not quite ready
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Old 12-05-2011, 12:11 AM   #864
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for spring
I am prepared;
a stack of catalogs,
dreams of color where love will lie,
warm me
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Old 12-05-2011, 05:43 PM   #865
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Warm me
down to my toes
with your gentle breathing.
The tide of your lust floods my ear,
lifts me.
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lifts me
beyond the shame
for a fragile moment
the waves crashing against the rocks
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Old 12-07-2011, 06:37 AM   #867
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Of time,
I’ve heard it said,
it’s fickle and impatient;
a petulant child waiting for
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Old 12-07-2011, 06:38 AM   #868
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of time,
I speak little
thinking of your return;
each day is adequate comfort,
I wait
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Old 12-07-2011, 06:46 AM   #869
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I wait
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listen for the floor creak,
wonder at the quiet of night,
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Old 12-07-2011, 06:53 AM   #870
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always
waiting bedside,
content with simple words
eager eyes follow my morning,
my friend
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My friend --
under my skin
inside my brittle bones
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Old 12-08-2011, 05:28 AM   #873
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More green
she said in haste,
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dig deep,
find your lost child
playing, your hide and seek
somewhere beneath the workman's suit,
wide eyed
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Wide eyed
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Mom would answer the phone
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