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Can you "Tell" after you have "Shown" ?
I started to re-read a book I really enjoyed recently. The main reason was to see if I read it in a different way from the 1st time, bearing in mind all I had read here.
I felt I did read more in to certain things and I was looking at what was being said in more detail. Is that good?
Anyway, the good old "Show don't tell" thing has always got to me, so when I read this part:
"tugging at a belt that had no hope of ever making it up to his belly button"
I thought - Ok, a good way to show he's fat, has a beer belly etc.
Then, 10 lines later, it says "[Name] stuffed his fat hands into his jacket pockets.........."
Is the above line Telling me he has fat hands?, and if so, is it OK because I have already worked out he is fat from the "Show" above?
Or, am I reading to much into it?
Help!?!?!?!
I started to re-read a book I really enjoyed recently. The main reason was to see if I read it in a different way from the 1st time, bearing in mind all I had read here.
I felt I did read more in to certain things and I was looking at what was being said in more detail. Is that good?
Anyway, the good old "Show don't tell" thing has always got to me, so when I read this part:
"tugging at a belt that had no hope of ever making it up to his belly button"
I thought - Ok, a good way to show he's fat, has a beer belly etc.
Then, 10 lines later, it says "[Name] stuffed his fat hands into his jacket pockets.........."
Is the above line Telling me he has fat hands?, and if so, is it OK because I have already worked out he is fat from the "Show" above?
Or, am I reading to much into it?
Help!?!?!?!