macalicious731
Okay. Cleanly writing your charcter's physical description into your story. I've seen it done a dozen ways. Sometimes the importance of character varies the description; sometimes it's full of details, sometimes it's only a couple of words. It could be:
Slipped behind a dialogue tag:
"It's nothing," she said, flipping her long brown hair behind her shoulder.
Or in an entire paragraph devoted solely to physical description. - I find these long and drawn out, and I usually skip them over when I read.
And not to mention timing. When do you do it? Somewhere in the beginning is most expected, but is that the first couple of pages? the first chapter? ... the list goes on. Of course, everything depends on genre, style, story, character... obviously variation is going to make a difference.
So how do you like to write it?
Slipped behind a dialogue tag:
"It's nothing," she said, flipping her long brown hair behind her shoulder.
Or in an entire paragraph devoted solely to physical description. - I find these long and drawn out, and I usually skip them over when I read.
And not to mention timing. When do you do it? Somewhere in the beginning is most expected, but is that the first couple of pages? the first chapter? ... the list goes on. Of course, everything depends on genre, style, story, character... obviously variation is going to make a difference.
So how do you like to write it?