I think this is where I should post this (and how I should post it), but you have my apologies if I read the maze wrong. It is a very short piece of 249 words. It is about drug use, and a little graphic. I fully intended to submit it to a contest, but chickened out. The only person I showed it to was an ex-heroin user for fact-checking.
My punctuation is admittedly random. I have no excuses for this (well, I have lots, but they are flimsy at best).
Tris
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Blood Fix
Nicole finds a vein. The needle is warmed by the boiled dose. It will be hot going in. It will burn. That is a simple fact of the drug. She pauses before piercing the skin. What she is doing feels like defeat. She’s shot up a lot of friends, but she was using then, too. This is far worse. This is her child. She swore she would keep this poison away from her. It got to Amber anyway.
Now she’s back in another alley. This time helping Amber fix safely. She refuses to go home and leave her to her birthright. When she pushes in, she will send the next wave of addictive toxins into her daughter. Then in five hours or so, the next, until she can convince her to choose painful cold reality instead of this slumbering ache.
She holds another second. Hopeful.
Amber’s muscles tighten. She is waiting for the needle and it isn’t coming. In a mirror of her childhood, spent waiting beside her droopy-eyed mother for food and love, she says nothing. She reaches for the needle to help herself.
Nicole responds to the movement and jabs the needle in. A wave of pain shoots up Amber’s arm. Behind it is the second wave: a lying promise of numb contentment. The heat hits her heart first. She knew it would. It burns through her brain in a cresting fury that washes out all thought. Behind it the void seems anticlimactic. As usual.
My punctuation is admittedly random. I have no excuses for this (well, I have lots, but they are flimsy at best).
Tris
***
Blood Fix
Nicole finds a vein. The needle is warmed by the boiled dose. It will be hot going in. It will burn. That is a simple fact of the drug. She pauses before piercing the skin. What she is doing feels like defeat. She’s shot up a lot of friends, but she was using then, too. This is far worse. This is her child. She swore she would keep this poison away from her. It got to Amber anyway.
Now she’s back in another alley. This time helping Amber fix safely. She refuses to go home and leave her to her birthright. When she pushes in, she will send the next wave of addictive toxins into her daughter. Then in five hours or so, the next, until she can convince her to choose painful cold reality instead of this slumbering ache.
She holds another second. Hopeful.
Amber’s muscles tighten. She is waiting for the needle and it isn’t coming. In a mirror of her childhood, spent waiting beside her droopy-eyed mother for food and love, she says nothing. She reaches for the needle to help herself.
Nicole responds to the movement and jabs the needle in. A wave of pain shoots up Amber’s arm. Behind it is the second wave: a lying promise of numb contentment. The heat hits her heart first. She knew it would. It burns through her brain in a cresting fury that washes out all thought. Behind it the void seems anticlimactic. As usual.