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Here they are. Here's the list of participants, in case you're interested in guessing who wrote what:
AmaNicole CurtisPutnam dahmnait ddgryphon JBI Jenny LimeyDawg Meerkat Pat~ p.h.delarran poetinahat rhymegirl Solatium Stew21 threedogpeople Unique (Note: Some authors haven't yet sent in their poems.) I'll reveal the authors of each after New Year's. Enjoy! ======================== The Season of Gold by LimeyDawg for threedogpeople Hope was saved by a westward star, and rode a path of purest white, distilled, it found him swaddled there against the cold of shattered night. Then Joseph’s son, a promise set, against the endless track of time, eternal peace for coin of faith-- balance due by the tolling chime. He guaranteed in blood, the pact, that good illumes the lost soul’s way, where none are barred the righteous path who find an earnest knee to pray. Yet in the mangered season’s shine the sometimes faithful fret their lot, forgetful of the gift He gave they seek the things that they have not. Yet should the season find you spent, and coinless on the blessed day, remember promised riches wait for faithful feet that find the way. Lo! Stay the frenzied buying pace, and gaze upon the lighted tree discover hope in twinkling glows and faith in pine’s eternal leaves. +++ ‘TWAS THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS by Pat~ for poetinahat ‘Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the forum, Not a poet was showing improper decorum. They’d each hung their jingles on the Poet-Tree with care, In hopes that their Moderator would soon be there. They posted, then snuggled deep down in their beds, While visions of rep comments danced in their heads. And I in my PJ’s, with laptop in lap, Had just settled down for my Christmas Eve nap, When out from the Net there arose such a clatter, I logged on to see just what was the matter; Into the forum I flew like a flash, Expecting to see all now lost but the cache. The glow from the screen of my laptop so fine Gave the luster of green lights from peeps now online, When what to my wondering eye should appear— A bard-in-a-hat from the wrong hemisphere! He was clutching a gift of some squid for the Squad, And I knew in a moment, it must be our Mod. More rapid than eagles his poets all came, As he posted and PM’d and called them by name: “Now Limey, now Turkey, now Haskins and Annie! On Louis, on Neuro, on Sebby and Jenny! To the top of “New Posts,” lest these threads start to fall! Now write away! write away! write away all!” As dry leaves that before the wild hurricane fly When they meet with an obstacle, mount to the sky, So up to the forum, the poets they flew, With their heads full of iambs; pentameter, too. And then in a twinkling, there appeared in no time The prosodic inscribing of each poet’s rhyme. As I stretched out my hand, and was starting to post, Again came that modly bard, fresh from the coast. He was dressed in his boardies, all wet head to toe, And clutched in his hand was a soggy rondeau; A bundle of rep points was flung on his back, Along with some crits and a well-timed wisecrack. His eyes how they twinkled, his dimples how merry! His cheeks were all suntanned, though lately quite hairy; The smile on his face was as sly as a cat, And perched on his head was that infamous hat. He took down the jingles from our Poet-Tree, And then began reading one written by me; A wink of his eye and a twist of his head, Soon gave me to know I had nothing to dread. He opened his sack and dispensed his rp’s For all of our efforts with the greatest of ease. His praise was prolific, his crits were astute— Though his own greater talent no one would dispute. Then laying a finger aside of his hat, His green light went red as my neighbor’s Fiat. But I heard him exclaim, as he hid from our sight, “Merry Christmas to all here at Absolute Write!” +++ For P.H. Delarran by Meerkat for p.h.delarran Too long away, So little write, These ninety days Of brittle right. Under a tent, P.H. slipped ears, "The Answer Man will calm your fears." But such men prey On depth of thought, They outpace "pray," Don't do what ought. P.H. slipped out, Sad, old, but wise, From tent of doubt, To trust her eyes. Same eyes we love, Who read her lines, Which rise above, Misleading signs. There is a tent, We all enjoy, And free of rent, Where few play coy. Too long away, So little write, P.H.'s lines Once more in sight. This rent-free thread, This room of word, Of laid-bare head, Where soulful heard. No Answer Man, No magic dove, No chosen clan, Just trust and love. Shun charlatan, All fire and wrath, Dear Delarran: Enjoy the path. +++ Indigestion by Jenny for Meerkat The poet tastes the world in words and offers cooking lessons. Pinch and prod, select and strip. Mix this with that. Add a dash -- Sprinkle insight. Taste a sip Ew! Steep in pain. Sear with passion. Roast or simmer, let it burn! Serve No wonder poets starve. +++ The Night Before Christmas (In the House of Love) by rhymegirl for Unique Twas the night before Christmas And all through the House Not a member was posting, Not even "oneblindmouse." Santa puzzled at this For he found it quite odd, No House of Love members, Why, not even a mod! The hot tub was empty, The water all drained, Zach, the towel boy, had bolted When finally unchained. Santa put down his sack And was scratching his head, Just where were all these people? Maybe all in Ray’s bed? Then as he was puzzling, He turned with a jerk, For he sensed someone peeking, It was more of a lurk. “Who is there?” Santa shouted, “Don’t be shy, can’t you speak?” “It’s just me,” came her voice, Then he saw her-- Unique. “Ah, Unique!” Santa said, “Good to see you, my dear, I’ve a present for you, You’ve been so good this year.” “I have?” asked Unique, “Do you really think so?” “Why, you bet!” Santa said, “I’m surprised you don’t know. “While these other folks here Say some real raunchy stuff, You just lurk." Said Unique, “And you think that’s enough?” “Why, of course! It’s delightful, This lurking you do, It’s so different, UNIQUE-- Why, exactly like you!” Santa gave her a gift-- A nice, shiny red sleigh, Then Unique climbed aboard, And flew up and away. And I heard Santa say As she drove out of sight, “Merry Christmas, my dear, And to all a good night.” +++ Journey from Christmas to Easter by threedogpeople for Pat~ In an ice cold stable on a moonless night, a young girl labored with all her might. A goat softly nickered, a donkey brayed, watching in wonder, her husband prayed. He made a bed as he worried and paced, "Newborn babies don't take much space" He found a manger then filled it with hay; he did his best on that cold winter day. The girl bore down, and then he came; the babe looked around as she spoke his name. "Your name is Jesus," she softly said, then placed him gently, in his humble bed. The angels sang in the star's bright light "The prince has come! Oh, Holy Night." The shepherds came, called in the night; the whole and the lame, radiant with delight. And when they did they received God's grace, they were first from outside to see the child's face. Christmas has come and the world's under stress; my family is too I must confess. But we'll pause from the hectic lives we pursue and remember He came for us and for you. He gave up his life on a rough cross, you know, to take our sins and wash us white as snow. Christmas is a journey that leads to the cross but it's not a fable and it's not a loss. Love the Lord with all of your heart, he'll take your sins and that's just the start. He'll remember and protect each and every one of us, he'll do it from love and doesn't ask for much. Accept the gift of God's son in this season of love but Easter is coming through that gift from above. Accept the gift now and we'll never be apart God has promised to protect us with His Holy Son's heart. +++ Remains by CurtisPutnam for Stew21 Progressing like a spinning top Traveled the landscape in buses Nursing wound upon wounds Not quite divorced, not quite freed Seen the world from inside jails Looked out the dirty windows of soul Landed here improbably cleansed Leaking humility, far from home. In the night dark street glistens with rain Homeless in the shelter of buildings Suddenly filled with disgust Resolve moved to change the landscape Spent coin no heads no tails Chose direction by indirections Somewhere between Memphis and West Memphis The policeman questioned intentions As though suicide were an option When seeing God flowing in the Mississippi. The kindness of strangers Treasure of human-kind Cleaned the house Cracked the door. Some timeless portal swung open Thrust soul into verity The sun came splashing to brain Like fresh cornbread upon tongue Eternity an onionskin away. Which way the wind blows That blows us Home? +++ Winter by JBI for ddgryphon Snowflake Floating down Onto the field Unique image Alone; Different Crunched upon the field Becoming nothing amongst Mashed mess Fearing the spring And its thaw Evergreen Tree Upright in the forest Stand true; proud Noble; Strong Roots run deep; Foundation But axes Whack whack whack Unsinew dreams Right out of the Ground Wolf Run noble free Together in the hunt Teeth tearing at Feasting upon the stag Yet bigger pieces others Grab; lesser Wolf gets Smallest Cut Gift Sitting there under the tree Representing the effort But not what You want Trying so hard To please Yet not quite Disappointment Bottom of the junk Cupboard Man Snowflake tree Wolf and gift Life is cold Death is swift Work is hard Days grow dark Caught off guard Silenced bark; Dying Sun Already begun +++ Bethlehem by ddgryphon for Jenny One birth-- ancient-- rings across generations past: altered in form, spirit never lost, though it divides nations; joins lost souls in love. +++ Because of You by Unique for rhymegirl Like a warm wind through my soul Your friendship brings beauty and light to my dark places. A gift of wine soothing a parched throat Given freely and with joy. Like warm snow – a miracle. Young at heart, yet gently wise Compassionate and generous You share both wit and wisdom Merry Christmas my friend and great blessings to you We are richer in our souls Because of you. +++ (two in one) by dahmnait for AmaNicole 1. Christmas Heart It matters not where You are, because Christmas hope Is where the heart is. 2. Untitled Her eyes sparkle, pure Delight as each box is opened. Revealing treasures stored Till that once a year grace Where against nature's backdrop Icicles of spun glass Are gently placed Next to clothespin reindeer. White, fluffy pom-poms of Santa’s beard Memories of childhood past. Strands of colored stars, arranged Just so. Nighttime sprinkles between Silver webs of tinsel. And above it all, Beautiful in its depiction Of love and hope, A silver star to guide us home. +++ Blown Glass by Stew21 for LimeyDawg one bulb, perfect, it hangs from an untrustworthy hook five others look the same, as ten others. a uniform look. but the one it stands alone. what's put into it shines through its thin, icy skin, the glass - glowing warm with light and merry. What's put in - transparent - we see it; the love revealed in the annealing - the patience. built-in strength for endurance. Time. The blown glass bulb - built from extremes: heat, time, and love. For Christmas - I'll take the not perfect, the handmade, the blown glass, the unique, the meant. For this Christmas - I'll take the effort. The time. The beauty of imperfection, the joy of a season. Let it become beautiful with effort, let it glow, with time, let it sing with patience, for in years, it's imperfection will still be lit by the memory and be perfect. +++ Still My Beaten Heart by poetinahat for Solatium as I despaired in empty days of gilded fattened sleep, I’d dream of peace in nonexistence: Death to still my beaten heart? but every time, I’d hesitate to give away my living breath and, strange, the force that stayed my hand was still my beaten heart forgetting morbid depths of blue, resumed my plodding sanity contented but unsatisfied, but still my beaten heart at last I startled from my slumber, shrugged off years of thickened dust: With Peace on Earth, Goodwill to Men instill my beaten heart! +++ The Comfort of Christmases to Come by p.h.delarran for JBI Gather near today In thankfulness and gladness Reach for the bounty laid out before you Fill your belly with goodness Outside the wind blows harsh The trees are bent and heaving Yet at the hearth, may your heart beat warm With those you love beside you Take comfort in these moments Let the season’s joy entice you The wind will soon stop howling, The trees will stop their heaving And you, my friend, will soon arrive At that place your heart’s been seeking Where the wind is never howling, Where the trees are never heaving +++ Christmas Wish by p.h. delarran for CurtisPutnam A simple Christmas wish Is what I offer you No tinsel wrap, or gilded dish Heaped high with Christmas goo I cannot sing a carol My voice is much too weak I will not fix a fruit cake I know you would not eat I’ve packed away the ornaments And all the pretty lights Yet still I gaze out at the stars On these cold Winter nights A joy has grown inside my heart I wish to pass it on I wish to share the Christmas hope That one bright night was born For Christmas is not only gold It’s silver, red and blue It’s lasting hope and family blood And friends faithful and true To you my friend, I lift my glass And wish you all the best The year will fly, it always does And Christmas may come last But in my heart, and in yours too May we carry all the year A spirit high with wondrous hope A spirit full of cheer +++ Eternal Light by ddgryphon for dahmnait That star, across ancient skies, bright in glorious hope, bringing grace to all people. Now shines out from those who know the holy child's love. - fin - Last edited by poetinahat; 01-18-2008 at 03:05 AM. Reason: added another poem |
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teh evil broad
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I absolutely loved the one I received, and am not at all pleased with the one I gave.
I'll have to make it up and do a better one. |
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Who should be writing ...
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I echo Trish -- my poem could definitely be improved, but I did enjoy writing it and being part of Secret Santa. I adored reading all the gifts. The balance between giggles and serious worked beautifully.
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Mine was belated so my person sent it to me directly:
The Comfort of Christmases to Come Gather near today In thankfulness and gladness Reach for the bounty laid out before you Fill your belly with goodness Outside the wind blows harsh The trees are bent and heaving Yet at the hearth, may your heart beat warm With those you love beside you Take comfort in these moments Let the season’s joy entice you The wind will soon stop howling, The trees will stop their heaving And you, my friend, will soon arrive At that place your heart’s been seeking Where the wind is never howling, Where the trees are never heaving |
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come in, all you jesters
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I loved the one sent to me. It's splendid.
I thought more of mine before I sent it. Now I can see it's only slightly coherent, and that I spend too much time on wordplay and not enough on meaning. It gives me something to work on. I hope everyone's enjoyed this event. There are still two poems outstanding. To those two poets, I'd ask that you please still send your poems; they'll be gladly received.
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Even with the names you've given, I'm finding it next-to-impossible to guess who wrote what. For just a couple of people, I've got it narrowed down to about 2 or 3 poems...I think...
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here for a minute...catch me?
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me too ...I think.
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Spring has Sprung! Wahoo!
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So is anybody gonna try to guess?
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here for a minute...catch me?
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I can't guess 'em all. But here's my first thoughts:
oh never mind-LOL, I'll be back. you go first, Kathy. Last edited by P.H.Delarran; 12-31-2007 at 09:18 PM. Reason: bwawk |
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I'll guess that Trish wrote the two poems for AmaNicole. |
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here for a minute...catch me?
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I think Trish wrote Blown Glass, for Limey Dawg.
DDGryphon wrote Bethlehem, for Jenny. Unique wrote Indigestion, for Meerkat. Rhymegirl wrote Unique's poem, HOL Night Before Christmas. I kinda think Limey wrote mine, but maybe he wrote Poet's-or maybe Pat did. uhhh, that's all I got, so far. |
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practical experience, FTW
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Okay, I'll venture a guess...I think maybe Jenny wrote mine?
And maybe Poet wrote P.H. Delarran's? |
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Who should be writing ...
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I didn't write "Journey from Christmas to Easter" (wish I had). I'm guessing Unique? It's so hard to guess style - much harder than I thought it would be. Did ddgryphon write "Still My Beaten Heart"? Rhymegirl "Bethlehem"? (that was my poem, and I love how short and strong it is)
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Okay, Poet, it's after New Year's...spill the beans.
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Claims the loan was a gift
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These are all fantastic, and I loved especially the one someone kindly wrote for me.
I believe Unique wrote that one for me; and I believe Stew21 wrote the one for ddgryphon. Last edited by Meerkat; 01-02-2008 at 06:33 PM. |
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teh evil broad
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someone guessed mine right. I'm not telling which one of you.
I think Jenny wrote mine. |
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I'm not guessing and I'm not telling either.
They were all great, though. It was fun. How about Valentine's Day? Give me a reason to like that holiday (for once)
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Just a figment…
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This was my first chance to get on since before the holiday. These are wonderful!
I am with Unique, I'm not guessing and I'm not telling either. I would, however, like the chance to edit mine a tad. I was able to get it off before my flight out, but I wish I could have had one more day to sit on the poem. To my giftee, I'll take care of my minor edits after Poet announces the names.
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Just a figment…
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Well, I am out of town again for a few days. And again, I am unsure if I will have internet access. So, if my Secret Santa wants to send Poet something...hint hint...nudge nudge...
![]() If, on the other hand, you can't complete something, don't worry about it. I had fun just writing mine. (I really need to work on this guilt trip thing. I just can't seem to stick with it effectively.)
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come in, all you jesters
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I've added all the authors' names.
Thank you, everyone, for playing; as always, you've produced a superb collection!
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Spring has Sprung! Wahoo!
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You guessed at least 3 right. You got mine right. And how about that--I wrote Unique's poem and she wrote mine. |
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poetinahat - did you do that on purpose?
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