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To Show or Not to
Show
By Linda Sherwood
linda@lindasherwood.com
You've done the interview and you've written the article. You're sure you nailed
it, but a little seed of doubt starts to grow. Is it accurate? Did you get
that complicated matter about taxes right?
If you have any doubt, you need to check with your source before the article
goes to print. That doesn't mean, however, that your sources should be reading
the article before publication. In fact, I suggest strongly that you DO NOT show
sources an article before publication.
New reporters unfamiliar with interviewing and taking quotes may feel doubtful
about their abilities. This often leads them to showing sources articles. If it
is a complicated subject, check your facts and talk some more to your source.
As a reporter you should be very careful with other's people words. You need to
ensure they are accurate and complete. At the same time, you need to make sure
your reader's receive a fair and accurate story.
People aren't always going to want to have something publicized. That doesn't
mean it shouldn't be publicized.
New to interviews
Most people have never been interviewed before. As you sit down to talk to them,
they will say things they didn't realize they said. They will make comments they
didn't mean. Part of it is nervousness and part of it is human nature.
When you write the article, you need to write it with this in mind. Would you
like your husband quoted in the daily paper saying, "My wife never wears
pajamas"? It may be true, but does it have a bearing on the story? Will it
just cause undue embarrassment?
Being in the newspaper is a big deal to a lot of people. Articles are clipped
and lovingly placed in scrapbooks. Some are even framed and hung on walls of new
businesses or in family rooms.
Does the quote have a bearing on the article? If the man was being quoted for
one of those most embarrassing moments stories, the answer may be yes. If it is
just a feature article about a man and wife, the answer may be no.
Maintain their dignity
As you write the story and use quotes, you don't want to make your source appear
comical. Especially if you are dealing with this source over and over again, you
need to make sure you treat their words with caution. You need them and they
need you.
Part of my job as a reporter is to contact law enforcement personnel on a
regular basis to get information. As I spoke to one officer, he made reference
to the weather, saying, "It's ugly out there." A nasty winter storm
had caused a number of accidents and he had a few colorful descriptions of the
weather.
He knew he was talking to me for an article and that I would quote him. As the
interview wound to a close, he asked that I not quote him saying anything
stupid, like the weather is ugly. "You take care of me and I'll take care
of you," he said.
I understood what he meant. We could joke on the phone, reporter and officer,
but I needed to understand some comments weren't for print. So how do I tell?
He is a police officer in the community and as such, is expected to put his life
on the line. He doesn't want the public to perceive him as a jokester. He had
given me good quotes about the weather conditions and the accidents caused that
were said professionally. He had also joked with me as we chatted.
The quote, "It's ugly out there," sounded good, but wasn't as useful
or informative as "The high number of accidents along the freeway prompted
us to close it for several hours. There were so many accidents happening that we
were short-handed."
The first quote could have been made by anyone. The second quote, however,
carries the authority of a police officer.
Make sure you make your sources look good and they will trust you. By trusting
you they will give you all sorts of good information that will allow you to
write even more stories. A reporter can be hated or disliked, but should always
be trusted.
Why you shouldn't show sources
* Typically, a news article should have sources from all sides of an issue. By
showing a source the finished article, you are inviting them to get a glimpse of
the opposite side's comments. This tends to make the source want to
"tweak" their comments.
* They tend to think that by granting them a sneak preview, you are also
granting them editorial duties. They suggest word changes, sentence structure
and even entire rewrites.
* People tend to not like what they said because they believe they "sound
stupid." Or they don't remember exactly what they said so they try to
change or elaborate on their comments. Often they may want to change a good,
simple quote to some multi-word thing that has no purpose at all except
protecting their rear.
What can you do?
* You can offer to read back a source's quotes to ensure accuracy. This should
only be done after the source has made the request, and should only include the
quotes from the source and not the entire article.
* Volunteer to be a source for an article. The best way to learn about handling
other's is to have your words mangled. (I'm serious. It will give you a real
appreciation of what your sources go through when they place their words in your
trust.)
* Read (or watch) other reporter's accounts of events you have covered. You will
know about it and you may be surprised at inaccuracies or perceptions of others.
* Continue to learn how to improve.
Just last week, I covered a meeting where people spoke out against a government
body. One woman who spoke, however, didn't speak out on the issue, but had
another concern. She made it very clear she didn't agree with the rest of the
protesters. That night on television, the local TV news showed her standing up
speaking, but the vocal was a voice over of the reporter saying, "many
people spoke to the commissioners objecting..."
This woman didn't object. She shouldn't have been shown speaking, especially
when the reporter made those comments. It was bad editing of the tape, but it
can happen in written articles as well. Make sure you don't make it seem like
someone said something they didn't. It only makes everyone more distrustful of
reporters.
Another View
Writer's Digest magazine asked several prominent authors and journalists to
share their opinions
(http://www.writersdigest.com/wd0301/responses.html)
about this topic.
Linda Sherwood is the editor of Small Town Press
(http://www.smalltownpress.net). She
started writing for newspapers while in high school.
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