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The
Low-Down on High Concept When
you're writing your screenplay, it's easy to forget that people go through a lot
of trouble to see a movie in a theater. They hire sitters, fight traffic, stand
in line, and pay good money. They devote two hours of their busy lives to you,
the screenwriter. There they are, sitting in a darkened room, ready—wishing,
hoping—to be moved by your story about to be projected on that giant screen. If
you're sitting in the audience on the night of the premiere, you'll be praying
your concept holds up. Movies are big, and when they fall, they flop. You don't
want it to be your fault. Movies
require a strong concept. Before you spend months or years on a screenplay, take
time to develop your concept. If
all stories worth telling have already been told, what is it about your story
that gives the universal a fresh twist? What will grab the attention of a script
reader (and later the audience) within the first ten pages, and keep her turning
pages until fade out? This
is where "high concept" comes into play. A
"high concept" script is one whose premise: -
is universal; -
has a fresh twist; -
involves an empathetic hero who is dealing with a BIG problem; and -
can be summed up in a 25-word logline that gives a good picture of the entire
movie. Many people see high concept as a marketing gimmick, and
it is true that studios love to cash in on high concept films. Because of their
catchy ideas, high concept scripts are easy to pitch, visualize, and sell. But
although the term gets thrown around a lot in Tinseltown, high concept wasn't
invented by Hollywood. Human
beings always have and always will respond to high concept stories. We crave
unique stories with compelling heroes and exciting conflicts. It's in our
nature. Shakespeare's plays (Romeo and Juliet, Much Ado About Nothing)
are high concept, as are many Greek tragedies (Oedipus Rex) and operas (The
Marriage of Figaro). Countless novels (Pride and Prejudice, A Tale
of Two Cities, The Da Vinci Code) are also high concept. No
matter what kind of story you strive to write, understanding the importance of
high concept is essential. High
Concept and Compelling Characters A
lot of people think high concept and great characters are incompatible, but in
fact the best high concept stories feature characters we love and cheer for. In Kramer
vs. Kramer, we want Ted Kramer to love and fight for his son. In Master
and Commander, we want Captain Jack Aubrey to win that sea battle and save
the British from defeat. Our favorite heroes are ordinary people who are moved
to do extraordinary things (Ted Kramer) or extraordinary people with abilities
beyond our own (James Bond). The hero's conflict usually involves both internal
and external conflict, but not always. (If James Bond were suddenly gripped by
self-doubt, I think we'd be utterly dismayed.) Some
more examples of compelling character pieces that are also high concept are Almost
Famous, Rain Man, and Monster. High
Concept is Cross-Genre Contrary
to popular belief, high concept isn't restricted to the formulaic blockbuster.
Action films and other big budget blockbusters are high concept, but guns, car
chases, and explosions are not obligatory. High concept is at home in every
genre: romantic comedies (Sleepless in
Seattle), animation (Chicken Run),
thrillers (The Silence of the Lambs),
indies (The Blair Witch Project),
classics (Gone with the Wind), chick
flicks (Thelma and Louise) and even
documentaries (The Fog of War).
Television, of course, abounds with high concept: Kojak, Friends, The
Sopranos. Is
Your Idea High Concept? If
you already have an idea, ask yourself the following questions: ***Is
your idea universal? This
isn't a matter of appealing to the lowest common denominator, but of touching
something common to all human beings. Does your idea speak to emotions and
behaviors we can all relate to? Is it about right and wrong? Life and death?
Love? Sacrifice? Personal integrity? Will your audience respond emotionally? As
I watched the Cape Horn scenes in Master
and Commander, I was riveted. Those scenes touched a primal, though
irrational, fear of mine—drowning in a storm at sea. Watching Jack Aubrey ride
those waves as if they were ripples in a bathtub helped me understand his
character, his obsession, and his rapport with his crew. For a moment, I was on
that ship, in his confident hands, and I was a true believer. ***Can
you give your idea a unique twist? This
is where you start asking yourself the "what if?" questions. Let's say
you want to write about a mother and daughter going through the teenage
rebellion stage. What if, spurred by their bickering, someone cast a spell on
them and they magically switched bodies? What if the only way to get back into
their own bodies was to learn to understand one another? This is Freaky
Friday (the 2003 remake). ***Is
your protagonist likeable, or does he or she at least elicit empathy? Will
the audience cheer for this protagonist? Will they care what happens to him or
her? If you're going for a darker piece, like Monster, will your audience at least understand and empathize with
your protagonist? Have you given him inner as well as outer conflicts? Will he
have to grow as a human being in order to accomplish his goal? ***Are
the stakes high enough? Examine
the problem and the stakes in your idea. Is this a problem others could care
about (universal)? Is it big enough to carry a two-hour movie? What about the
stakes? What will happen if your hero doesn't achieve his goal? In
Freaky Friday, mother and daughter
want their own bodies back for obvious reasons. But the screenwriters, Heather
Hach and Leslie Dixon, upped the ante with a plot complication. The women find
themselves in each other's bodies upon waking on Friday morning. But the mother,
Tess, is getting married on Saturday. If they don't switch back in time, either
the daughter, Anna, will have to go through with the wedding (unthinkable!), or
Tess will have to risk losing her fiancé. ***Can
you summarize your concept in a sentence of 25 words or less? Distilling your idea down to a few words forces you to
focus on what your story is about. Clarifying your concept will help keep your
screenplay on track. In addition, log lines are the industry standard. It's the
way busy studio executives, agents, and script readers communicate. To sell your
idea, you'll have to get it across clearly and concisely. What's more, people
who have heard your idea will have to be able to remember and pitch it to their
higher-ups. Below
are some sample log lines from three films starring Dustin Hoffman: When
a workaholic's wife abandons him and their young son, he must learn to be a
single dad. —Kramer vs. Kramer (18
words) A
struggling actor disguises himself as a woman and becomes a soap-opera star,
only to fall in love with the leading lady. —Tootsie (22 words) Just before elections, a spin-doctor and a Hollywood
producer fabricate a war to cover up a presidential sex scandal. —Wag
the Dog (19 words) ***Does
your title capture the spirit of your film? Yes,
the studio might change the title of your film. But don't forget that the title
is the first thing a reader sees. What's he more likely to pick up: The
Shark or Jaws? Make
sure your title fits with your log line and helps your script stand out from the
pile. Often
a one-word title can sketch out the whole movie: Splash. The best of these even give you the genre: Titanic,
Alien. Some
other great titles are: The Godfather Star Wars Singing in the Rain Schindler's List As
a screenwriter, you have to write what you care about, and if you care about
small, character-driven films, then by all means write those. But don't think
high concept is "too Hollywood" or doesn't apply to your film—at
least not until you've tried it. High concept leaves plenty of room for
originality, and will give you the means to make your very own, special
screenplay better. It
might even get you your first sale. Alexis Niki is an aspiring screenwriter and former translator living in Paris, France. She has subtitled and translated for Columbia TriStar, Warner Brothers, ARTE, German national (WDR, ZDF) and private (RTL, VOX) television, and others. She is also a member of the WriteCraft Critique Group and assistant editor at the group's companion website, www.writecraftweb.com, where she writes an ongoing series of screenwriting articles. |
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