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Received the manuscript back from the editor for a developmental edit. I took a look at it and fixed it up to the best of my abilities, but would like to get some feedback on the book from someone else. It's a 40k word memoir.
BLURB:
I can’t go to my grave with so much on my chest, but you will find discovering the truth might be more than one can take.
Growing up as a child, James had many friends. He was your average, curious and playful kid, who could make you smile in times of despair. The black sheep of the family, his father saw great things in him, though he was the youngest of three.
But in reality he was far from normal.
Tormented by demons and consumed by his mental illness, holding on to a life because of a promise. His smile buried the key to the rusty red door. The sick child with a bizarre past. The outside world knew nothing of his living nightmares; an abusive household and unstable mind sent him to the world of dreams.
If I can get some feedback on the book that would be great. PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU ARE INTERESTED.
BOOK CONTAINS MATURE MATERIAL.
Thank you in advance for your time.
BLURB:
I can’t go to my grave with so much on my chest, but you will find discovering the truth might be more than one can take.
Growing up as a child, James had many friends. He was your average, curious and playful kid, who could make you smile in times of despair. The black sheep of the family, his father saw great things in him, though he was the youngest of three.
But in reality he was far from normal.
Tormented by demons and consumed by his mental illness, holding on to a life because of a promise. His smile buried the key to the rusty red door. The sick child with a bizarre past. The outside world knew nothing of his living nightmares; an abusive household and unstable mind sent him to the world of dreams.
If I can get some feedback on the book that would be great. PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU ARE INTERESTED.
BOOK CONTAINS MATURE MATERIAL.
Thank you in advance for your time.
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