lol, cliff, ya fool! well done
LF, I can definitely see Gan's faults, but he's still likable. I think, also, that the other characters are less dimensional, for the simple reason that we can't see inside their heads, y'know? So of course we side with Gan.
I love the bit where Em gets a handle on RJ
haha, I can't wait to see what you think of my ending either!